Real IELTS Writing Task 1 - Diagram - Topic Shopping Centre & sample band 8.5

The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

? Sample Band 8.5:

The maps depict the changes made to the layout of the Happy Valley Shopping Centre between 1982 and 2012, a period spanning three decades.

Overall, the complex experienced substantial redevelopment, largely at the cost of nearby green spaces. The most prominent developments included the elimination of the lake to make way for a new retail area and a major reshuffling of the specialised stores within the building.

With regard to external alterations, the surrounding landscape was significantly transformed. The lake and adjacent parkland in the north-western section were removed and later converted into a furniture retail extension. In a similar manner, the wooded land in the south-west was cleared to provide space for a purpose-built car park. Nevertheless, several core facilities, namely the central entertainment zone, toilet facilities, the lift, and the western entrance, remained unchanged throughout the timeframe.

As for the internal layout, extensive relocation of shops took place. In 1982, the furniture store occupied the south-eastern corner, but by 2012, this position had been taken over by the food store, which had previously been located in the northern area. The space formerly used by the food store and the coffee shop was then reassigned to sports and electronics retailers. In addition, a row of themed restaurants was introduced along the eastern side, replacing earlier retail outlets.

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