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? Đề bài

THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS THE LIFE CYCLE of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Dàn Ý:

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* Paraphrase lại câu hỏi, KHÔNG thêm ý kiến.

* Dùng động từ như: illustrates, depicts, presents, shows.

Ví dụ:

The diagram illustrates the life cycle of a salmon, showing the stages from eggs to mature adults.

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Phải có 3 yếu tố band cao:

* Điểm bắt đầu

* Điểm kết thúc

* Tổng quan về số giai đoạn hoặc chuyển động (river → sea → river)

Ví dụ:

Overall, the life cycle consists of three main environments: the upper river, the lower river, and the open sea. The cycle begins with eggs laid upstream and ends when mature salmon return to the same area to spawn.

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Body 1: early stages�Upper river → eggs → fry → lower river → growing stage.

Body 2: later stages�Sea migration → adulthood → returning to the river to spawn.

Mỗi đoạn dùng:

* Linking words: initially, subsequently, afterwards, eventually

* Động từ mô tả tự nhiên: hatch, develop into, migrate, mature

? Sample Band 8.5:

The diagrams below present the life cycle of the salmon species, depicting its various stages from spawning to maturity.

Overall, the salmon life cycle involves spawning in the upper river, growth in the lower river, maturation in the open sea, and return to the upper river for spawning, completing the cycle.

The initial stage of the salmon life cycle begins with spawning in the upper river, where the eggs are laid in slow-moving water. These eggs then hatch into small stones, marking the start of the young salmon’s journey. Following this, the juvenile salmon move to the lower river, attracted by the fast-flowing waters, where they undergo significant growth over a period ranging from three to six months. This transitional phase sets the foundation for their development before they progress to the next stage of their life cycle.

Subsequently, the matured salmon embark on their migration to the open sea, a critical phase where they spend approximately a year. During this period, they adapt to the vast expanse of the sea environment, honing their instincts and physical capabilities. This stage of the cycle is essential for the salmon’s overall development and readiness for their eventual return journey. Ultimately, the life cycle of the salmon culminates with the adult fish returning to the upper river for spawning purposes, thus completing the natural cycle and ensuring the continuation of the species.

WORD LIST:

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* lay eggs / spawn – đẻ trứng

* hatch – nở

* migrate / move downstream / move upstream – di chuyển

* develop / grow / mature – phát triển

* emerge – xuất hiện

* return to / travel back to – quay lại

* inhabit – sinh sống

* transition to – chuyển sang

?. ???????? ????? (???̂? ??̂́? ??? ???̀??)

* initially

* subsequently

* afterwards

* in the next stage

* eventually / finally

* prior to V-ing

?. ????? (???? ??̛̀ ?????̂? ??̂̀ ??̂? ???̛?̛̀?? ??̂́??)

* fry / juvenile salmon – cá hồi non

* adult salmon – cá hồi trưởng thành

* freshwater / marine environment – nước ngọt / biển

* upstream / downstream – ngược dòng / xuôi dòng

* slow-moving water / fast-flowing water – nước chảy chậm / nhanh

* pebbles / riverbed – đá cuội / đáy sông

?. ????-????? ?????????? ???́? ?̆? đ??̂̉? ???????? & ???????

* Passive voice tự nhiên�Eggs are laid in the upper river…

* Reduced clauses�…salmon, migrating to the sea, spend about one year in the ocean.

* Noun phrases�the final stage of development, their early freshwater phase

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